记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。正是初英这一点才使得所记、记叙文的语记重点在于“述说”和“描写”,使文章结构散乱,即我们通常所说的五个“ W ”( what, who, when, where, why )和一个“ H ”( how ) 。因此一篇好的记叙文要叙述条理清楚,顺叙最容易操作
,插叙还是补叙,插叙
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一、英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化 ,所叙有鲜活的动态感 、过程及结果,如
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In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things. Apart form doing my homework, reading an English novel, watching TV and doing some housework, I went on a trip to Qingdao. It is really a beautiful city. There are many places of interest to see. But what impressed me most was the sunrise.
The next morning I got up early. I was very happy because it was a fine day. By the time I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red. In a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing. The sun was very red, not shining. It rose slowly. At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball. At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright.都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。如身临其境
。且富于变化
。深入其中。如:
The other day, I was driving along the street. Suddenly, a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast. I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side. But it was too late. The car hit my bike and I fell off it.
Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella, for it was raining hard. On the way, he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover. Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her, but he was too short. What could he do? Then he had a good idea.